EA Fitness Offers New Machines, Opportunities
East Aurora just got healthier — There is a new business in town geared toward a fitter and healthier community. It is called EA Fitness, and its goal is to be a high quality fitness place for everyone in the area.
May 17th, 2010 at 2:42 am
can somebody correct my translation, 10 points?
Hello
I ve translated this French article (http://www.nicematin.com/ta/comparaisons… and need somebody to read my translation to check if it sounds English.
thx a lot
This is the article:
Summer is striding up and some people are saying to themselves that their figures are not yet perfect to dare to appear wearing a swimsuit or a bikini. Then, what should be done to lose extra kilos and to be ready for the first beach outings? All you need to do is merely make the most of fitness and gym centres just about anywhere in the city. In order to help you to carry out your task, we have chosen seven companies and compared qualities of each.
We have taken into account six elements in our rating criteria: price, equipment, welcome, coaching, atmosphere and accessibility. It only remains for you to opt for the centre which matches with you.
1. Top Fit
Inevitable in Antibes, Top Fit is most likely the sport centre that offers the biggest range of activities. From BodyPump to aquaerobics along with Pilates Swiss ball, you will obviously find a class that you are interested in. At the reception, they take care of you and show you all the rooms (swimming pool, Jacuzzi, weights room…). The unique possibility of subscription is the only drawback; it is worth 820 € a year and 610 € for the under-23s.
2. Antibes Squash and Fitness Club
The centre is perfectly equipped and allows indulging yourself in many ways. Among the little assets, you can make the most of a squash court which is the ideal sport for competitors. As for those who want to build a dream body, they are offered the Power Plate program. This is the opportunity to get a monitoring in real professional hands and to make sure that you will not tear a muscle by trying to brave all the machines. You will have to, so as to take advantage of all the assets of the centre, pay out 85 Euros per month for a one-year subscription. This the most expansive centre in Antibes.
3. Versace Gym Antibes
If you like to pump iron and to enhance your stamina, this centre will fill you with joy. The warm atmosphere made by the welcome team gets you rid of fears that you might feel when having to try machines you do not know how to use. The coach, whose nickname is “JC”, monitors, motivates and urges you to make efforts and he always cheerfully do so. The price is reasonable (420 Euros a one-year subscription) and it can be spread out according to your available funds. There only one criticism is the lack of space between each machine that causes a lack of privacy. Above all if you are in trouble.
4. Pacific
Do not trust the centre outside appearance. Because if it is perhaps harder to access its premise than other centres; you will find all the qualities of the sports room inside. On top of classic weight machines, exercise bikes and treadmills, the centre also offers a large range of specific classes. The staves take care of you and follow you about like a shadow. They always feel great at the Pacific and always contentedly motivate you. All you need to do is to go further than the first impression.
5. Keep Cool Antibes
You are willing to discover the joys of rowing machine, exercise bike and stepper in a quiet area of the city centre? This is a good address. Even if the main room is quite small, you neither feel to be spied nor to be watched; the monthly price is 29.90 Euros, which makes it one of the most attractive price of the city; which has to be toned down with the 106 Euros for the subscription (66 Euros for students). At the reception, they quickly get you feel at home. It only remains for you to suffer and sweat after…
thx for having answered that quickly, both of you have helped me so much, will give the points ASAP
thx again
May 17th, 2010 at 7:44 am
I doubt whether anyone can be arsed to answer this question…
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May 17th, 2010 at 7:46 am
OK so what I’ve done is looked through and corrected in IN CAPITALS the parts which didn’t make sense. This should be ok but I can’t guarentee that it’s exactly what you need to write.
Summer is APPROACHING/COMING UP and some people are CONCERNED ABOUT THEIR FIGURES AND THE PROSPECT OF WEARING A BIKINI….. we have chosen seven companies and compared THE qualities of each….TOP FIT (lose the word ‘inevitable’ I don’t understand what you’re saying)…you will DEFINITELY find a class that INTERESTS YOU… THE ONLY DRAWBACK IS THE REQUIREMENT OF ANNUAL SUBSCRIPTION… The centre is perfectly equipped and ALLOWS YOU TO INDULGE YOURSELF IN MANY WAYS, among the FACILITIES…Power Plate program. This GIVES USERS ACCESS TO THE HELP OF EXPERIENCED PROFESSIONALS….all the machines. IN ORDER TO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF ALL OF THE FACILITIES YOU WILL BE REQUIRED TO PAY A MONTHLY SUBSCRIPTION OF 85 EUROS FOR ONE YEAR, MAKING this the most EXPENSIVE centre in Antibes…
If you like to pump iron and to enhance your stamina, this centre will DELIGHT YOU..The warm atmosphere made by the WELCOMING team….monitors, motivates and ENCOURAGES you TO DO YOUR BEST AND IS ALWAYS HAPPY TO DO SO…THE only one criticism WOULD BE the lack of space between each machine WHICH causes a lack of privacy. >>>Above all if you are in trouble (this bit doesn’t make sense).<<<
Do not BE FOOLED BY the CENTRE’S outside appearance….TheSTAFF take GOOD care of you and follow you about like a shadow. They always feel great at the Pacific and ARE always HAPPY to motivate you. All you need to do is LOOK BEYOND the first impression.
ARE YOU LOOKING to discover the joys of rowing machineS, exercise bikeS and stepperS in a quiet area of the city centre? This is a GREAT LOCATION, you NEVER FEEL LIKE YOU’RE BEING WATCHED (not sure about this bit, it didn’t make sense)…29.90 Euros, MAKING it one of the most ATTRACTIVELY-PRICED GYMS IN THE CITY, HOWEVER THE TOTAL SUBSCRIPTION WORKS OUT AT 106 EUROS. At the reception, they ARE QUICK TO MAKE YOU feel at home. ALL THAT remains NOW IS for you to suffer and sweat…
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May 17th, 2010 at 7:48 am
Summer is COMING UP FAST and some people are TELLING themselves that their figures are not yet GOOD ENOUGH to dare to appear wearing a swimsuit or a bikini. SO, what should be done to lose THOSE extra kilos and GET ready for the first beach outings? All you need to do is merely make the most of THE fitness and gym centres ALL OVER the city. In order to help you to carry out your task, we have chosen seven FACILITIES and compared THE qualities of each.
We have taken into account six elements in our rating criteria: price, equipment, welcome, coaching, atmosphere and accessibility. It only remains for you to opt for the centre which BEST MEETS YOUR NEEDS.
1. Top Fit
Top Fit is most likely the sports centre that offers the biggest range of activities. From BodyPump to aquaerobics along with Pilates Swiss ball, you ARE BOUND TO find a class TO INTEREST YOU. At the reception, they take GOOD care of you and show you all the FACILITIES (swimming pool, Jacuzzi, weights room…). The INFLEXIBLE MEMBERSHIP SCHEME is the only drawback; it is worth 820 € a year and 610 € for the under-23s.
2. Antibes Squash and Fitness Club
The centre is perfectly equipped and AFFORDS many ways to indulge yourself. You can make the most of a squash court, which is the ideal sport for competitors. As for those who want to build a dream body, THERE IS the Power Plate PROGRAMME. This is an opportunity to get monitored by real professionals and to make sure that you will not tear a muscle by trying to brave all the machines. To take advantage of all the centre’s FACILITIES, you will have to SHELL out 85 Euros per month for a one-year subscription. This the most expensive centre in Antibes.
3. Versace Gym Antibes
If you like to pump iron and to enhance your stamina, this centre will fill you with joy. The warm atmosphere CREATED by the welcome team DISPELLS ANY fears you might have when trying machines you do not know how to use. The coach, whose nickname is “JC”, monitors, motivates and urges you to make efforts and he always DOES SO cheerfully. The price is reasonable (420 Euros a one-year subscription) and it can be spread out TO SUIT YOUR CASHFLOW. The only criticism is the lack of space between each machine, WHICH causes a lack of privacy. Above all if you are in trouble.
4. Pacific
DON’T BE TAKEN IN by the Centre’s UNPREPOSSESSING appearance – you will APPRECIATE all the qualities of the sports room inside. APART FROM the classic weight machines, exercise bikes and treadmills, the centre also offers a large range of specific classes. The STAFF take care of you and follow you about like a shadow. They always motivate you at the Pacific and make you feel great. All you need to do is SEE BEYOND the Centre’s appearance.
5. Keep Cool Antibes
ARE YOU are willing to discover the joys of THE rowing machine, exercise bike and stepper in a quiet area of the city centre? This is a good address. Even if the main room is quite small, you won’t feel like you’re being watched; the monthly price is 29.90 Euros, which makes it one of the most attractive prices in the city, although there is also a one-off membership fee of 106 Euros (66 Euros for students). At reception, they quickly make you feel welcome. It remains only for you to suffer and sweat afterwards!
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